Particlehttps://particle.news/

Your landing page’s weakest score is Value props.

How Particle ranks

  1. 1.Particle53
  2. 2.Newsly48
  3. 3.Curio (Rio)46
  4. 4.Spun Labs18
Fix Value props
53Growth scoreupdated

category scores

Value props38Mobile web52
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Value props38Mobile web52

Value props

38Poor

Title, subtitle, hero — do they sell the product's true value?

Particle’s headline vaguePopular

Working

  • Radar banner cites 120,000+ podcasts
  • Article counts imply multi-source depth
  • Live feed proves the product is real

Could improve

  • No headline states what Particle does
  • No outcome or emotional copy anywhere
  • Only explicit pitch sells Radar, not core app

Mobile web

52Fair

The phone experience as a first-class citizen.

Mobile web annotations on the mobile capture1234
  1. App Store badge — Clipped off the right edge, cutting the page's only visible conversion action in half.
  2. Popular Technology header — Desktop-scale heading overflows the viewport, truncating 'Technology' mid-word.
  3. Explore Radar bar — Sticky promo bar tops the first viewport and routes taps away from any conversion goal.
  4. Marvel Cinema pill — Topic pill clips mid-word at the edge with no visible scroll affordance.

Information hierarchy

54Fair

Does the design help or inhibit what the page is trying to say?

Particle desktop capture for Information hierarchy

What works

What to improve

Trust

58Fair

Proof that the product is real, competent, and safe to try.

Particle desktop capture for Trust

How Particle compares

Trust read

CTA

63Fair

Copy, size, verb, cost-feel — does the primary CTA earn the click?

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